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Inks and Copics... don't know if I pulled it off or not...

Crit open... hit me with your best shot... fire awaaAAAAy... LOL!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The only issue that hasn't been pointed out already that I can see is compositional - this is the first critique I've written so I hope this makes sense!

I think the composition would work better if the perspective was changed so the feet/end of reflection and the knife are on thirds lines (bad english haha) giving the knife more importance (I think you want this, seeing the negative space around the drip on the knife pushing the eye up to the blade..?). This would also make image less cramped at the top, putting the most important elements near the middle, where most people look first. Right now I look at knees before noticing the rest of the image. Other than that, fantastic work. Nice use of puddle to draw the eye up.